Topics and Questions for Paper #2

Field Hockey

1. How does stress from school play a factor on how you play?

2. How does sleep impact how you play?

3. How does your diet impact how you play?

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  1. UnknownOctober 17, 2018 at 7:50 AM

    I would possibly choose a different topic because the current one would be hard to gather data for in a couple of days. It would be easier to focus on something more specific that would be adequate for gathering data. Also, add more details about how you are going to do research on this topic.

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