Topics and Questions for Paper #2
Field Hockey
1. How does stress from school play a factor on how you play?
2. How does sleep impact how you play?
3. How does your diet impact how you play?
Reflection (Assignment #2 - Rough Draft)
I think personally I need to add more statistics in my results section. My peer reviews suggested a bit less of statistics because there were a lot of numbers and it was already shown in their graphs. I also think my flow could be a bit better overall. I also need to go back and fix my in-text citations as I forgot to go back and fix them. In addition, I need to explain the quotes that I found instead of just placing them in my paragraphs. I also need a good end to my paragraphs to sum it up. My paper could have been a bit more formal. I need to add more information especially in the diet section and the discussion. I didn't have an appendix section so I ned to add that. I need to go back and fix my paper to make it all APA format because I believe I messed up my reference page. For the organization of my paper I think I did a good job with separating each section and staying on that topic. My survey was also well done there were a lot of questions so I could have added more of...
I would possibly choose a different topic because the current one would be hard to gather data for in a couple of days. It would be easier to focus on something more specific that would be adequate for gathering data. Also, add more details about how you are going to do research on this topic.
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