I would possibly choose a different topic because the current one would be hard to gather data for in a couple of days. It would be easier to focus on something more specific that would be adequate for gathering data. Also, add more details about how you are going to do research on this topic.
Title: College Campus Safety and Security Introduction Hook Sentence: Do you feel safe on your campus? Problems: Most times students feel scared to walk home from a night class or even from another dorm when it starts to get dark out. This is a big problem because violence is getting worse in the United States not just on college campuses, but everywhere. Campus safety needs to do a better job of reassuring students that they are in good hands and safe at all times of the day. In Iowa City alone this past semester there have been multiple incidents of crime, whether this be inside of a dorm, or on the streets. Examples: Male student in Petersen Hall watching girls sleep at night. Male found roaming around Catlett Hall with a knife. Two men shot downtown. University of Iowa student abducted and found dead. (not on campus) Rape Victims (from all college campuses) Solution to the Issue: We should have patrols outside for reassurance and make sure t...
I would possibly choose a different topic because the current one would be hard to gather data for in a couple of days. It would be easier to focus on something more specific that would be adequate for gathering data. Also, add more details about how you are going to do research on this topic.
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