Analysis of Sample Proposals
Ranking (1) "Course Requirement: Extortion"
Strengths:
This one gives many examples and statistics about textbooks and how they are expensive. It also gives past, present and future references in it (how expensive they were, how much they cost now, in the future...).
Weaknesses:
They didn't prove their findings. There isn't a good flow to this argument.
Ranking (2) "A Proposal to Allow Off-Campus Purchases"
Strengths:
It had good organization because they used sub-headings. The flow was good. In addition, they stayed on topic.
Weaknesses:
It should broaden their audience to attract more people. There weren't to many examples in this and I think more specific examples should be provided.
Ranking (3) "Why the United States Should Adopt Nuclear Power"
Strengths:
The organization was good but it didn't flow. Very in depth on the topic.
Weaknesses:
It didn't flow that well and it was choppy. It also didn't provide many examples.
Strengths:
This one gives many examples and statistics about textbooks and how they are expensive. It also gives past, present and future references in it (how expensive they were, how much they cost now, in the future...).
Weaknesses:
They didn't prove their findings. There isn't a good flow to this argument.
Ranking (2) "A Proposal to Allow Off-Campus Purchases"
Strengths:
It had good organization because they used sub-headings. The flow was good. In addition, they stayed on topic.
Weaknesses:
It should broaden their audience to attract more people. There weren't to many examples in this and I think more specific examples should be provided.
Ranking (3) "Why the United States Should Adopt Nuclear Power"
Strengths:
The organization was good but it didn't flow. Very in depth on the topic.
Weaknesses:
It didn't flow that well and it was choppy. It also didn't provide many examples.
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